Comments for Clumsy Chelle http://colmeasche.wordpress.com Pieces of me... Tue, 22 Jul 2008 12:12:45 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 Comment on Celebrity Collage by MyHeritage by Ayesia http://colmeasche.wordpress.com/2008/07/19/celebrity-collage-by-myheritage-3/#comment-16 Ayesia Tue, 22 Jul 2008 12:12:45 +0000 http://colmeasche.wordpress.com/2008/07/19/celebrity-collage-by-myheritage-3/#comment-16 You know what, it's obvious that you're good in ur grammar, good in ur writings...but i've noticed something, you're narrating ur adventures, ur experiences in details but without excitement/thrill... it seems that u were just narrating an old story from the past or history book, so many twist or nonsense statement that makes ur readers feel bored.. maybe that's the reason why some of the students (including me -sometimes) hate history class, coz most of the time, we feel bored and feel sleepy bcoz of so many details, so many nonsense statement and hard to remember... im sorry for this critisism, but i hope u'll take it as a positive challange to improve...i admit, im not so good in english and narrating stories too,,,but i love reading stories and i often give critisisms. just an advice, in narrating ur story, be direct and at least with sense, so ur readers/viewers can easily relate, understand and feel the essence of ur writings,,,avoid narrating/describing so much things without a clear description... try to read marie claire, cosmopolitan, yes mags or even FHM magz (though it's a men's magz,most the articles there are very interesting),,, it can help u more... articles in those magz also features stories, about experiences, life and tips for their readers. specially Marie Claire and Cosmo (I am one of the graphic artists and retoucher of those magz for almost 1 year) try also to watch PINOY MEETS WORLD (from ch7), since you're a traveller. chelle, i've known u since grade school, actually, once in ur life, i was ur friend...and i really admire u until now,,,u were an achiever, winner...so keep up ur good work and GOD bless You know what, it’s obvious that you’re good in ur grammar, good in ur writings…but i’ve noticed something, you’re narrating ur adventures, ur experiences in details but without excitement/thrill… it seems that u were just narrating an old story from the past or history book, so many twist or nonsense statement that makes ur readers feel bored..
maybe that’s the reason why some of the students (including me -sometimes) hate history class, coz most of the time, we feel bored and feel sleepy bcoz of so many details, so many nonsense statement and hard to remember…
im sorry for this critisism, but i hope u’ll take it as a positive challange to improve…i admit, im not so good in english and narrating stories too,,,but i love reading stories and i often give critisisms.
just an advice, in narrating ur story, be direct and at least with sense, so ur readers/viewers can easily relate, understand and feel the essence of ur writings,,,avoid narrating/describing so much things without a clear description…

try to read marie claire, cosmopolitan, yes mags or even FHM magz (though it’s a men’s magz,most the articles there are very interesting),,, it can help u more… articles in those magz also features stories, about experiences, life and tips for their readers. specially Marie Claire and Cosmo (I am one of the graphic artists and retoucher of those magz for almost 1 year)
try also to watch PINOY MEETS WORLD (from ch7), since you’re a traveller.

chelle, i’ve known u since grade school, actually, once in ur life, i was ur friend…and i really admire u until now,,,u were an achiever, winner…so keep up ur good work and GOD bless

]]> Comment on Hello world! by ian http://colmeasche.wordpress.com/2008/04/22/hello-world/#comment-7 ian Mon, 26 May 2008 02:45:15 +0000 #comment-7 grabe kana man...hehehehe....lam mo ayaw ko ng numbers gusto ko mang sira ng pc..hehehehehe.joke grabe kana man…hehehehe….lam mo ayaw ko ng numbers gusto ko mang sira ng pc..hehehehehe.joke

]]> Comment on CONFESSIONS… ABNKKSuLTNPLAKo by tata_wa29 http://colmeasche.wordpress.com/2008/05/02/confessions%e2%80%a6-abnkksultnplako/#comment-6 tata_wa29 Sat, 17 May 2008 15:28:08 +0000 http://colmeasche.wordpress.com/?p=4#comment-6 ay!!! tangekz magaling ka!!! hmmm...la ka lang kasing bilib sa sarili o sya sya..basata ganun...magaling ka..practice practice... ika nga practice makes permanent...wahahahhahaha.. gud luck and God bless.. wahahhaha. ay!!!
tangekz magaling ka!!!
hmmm…la ka lang kasing bilib sa sarili
o sya sya..basata ganun…magaling ka..practice practice…
ika nga practice makes permanent…wahahahhahaha..
gud luck and God bless..
wahahhaha.

]]> Comment on Hello world! by Tintua http://colmeasche.wordpress.com/2008/04/22/hello-world/#comment-5 Tintua Mon, 05 May 2008 09:06:37 +0000 #comment-5 Ang taray mu mama duks, Sosyal! Ang taray mu mama duks, Sosyal!

]]> Comment on CONFESSIONS… ABNKKSuLTNPLAKo by spliceanddice http://colmeasche.wordpress.com/2008/05/02/confessions%e2%80%a6-abnkksultnplako/#comment-4 spliceanddice Sun, 04 May 2008 23:03:39 +0000 http://colmeasche.wordpress.com/?p=4#comment-4 Stumbled here while doing my blog rounds. I'm a Zafra reader, too. The 'Twisted' series truly gave me more reasons to write and practice and write some more and practice some more. I suggest you read a bit of Conrado De Quiros' works, too. His writings are good reads, although sometimes his ideas verge on the radical side, if not already toeing it. Stumbled here while doing my blog rounds.

I’m a Zafra reader, too. The ‘Twisted’ series truly gave me more reasons to write and practice and write some more and practice some more. I suggest you read a bit of Conrado De Quiros’ works, too. His writings are good reads, although sometimes his ideas verge on the radical side, if not already toeing it.

]]> Comment on CONFESSIONS… ABNKKSuLTNPLAKo by charleslemark http://colmeasche.wordpress.com/2008/05/02/confessions%e2%80%a6-abnkksultnplako/#comment-3 charleslemark Sun, 04 May 2008 04:15:35 +0000 http://colmeasche.wordpress.com/?p=4#comment-3 friend.. online ka na din! hahaha... link mo ako sa blogroll mo.. friend.. online ka na din! hahaha… link mo ako sa blogroll mo..

]]> Comment on CONFESSIONS… ABNKKSuLTNPLAKo by jajey http://colmeasche.wordpress.com/2008/05/02/confessions%e2%80%a6-abnkksultnplako/#comment-2 jajey Sat, 03 May 2008 14:40:45 +0000 http://colmeasche.wordpress.com/?p=4#comment-2 Naks! This is awesome, Dude! Just go for it! You can do it!!! I'm always here for you - just one text away. Haha! God bless you always! Muah! Naks! This is awesome, Dude! Just go for it! You can do it!!! I’m always here for you – just one text away. Haha!
God bless you always! Muah!

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